1
Fill in the sender and recipient header
Enter your company's full name, mailing address, and the letter date. Then add the recipient's full name, title, company, and address. Use the legal entity name for corporate recipients.
π‘ Confirm the recipient's current title and address before sending β outdated details signal a mass mailout and reduce response rates.
2
Write the subject line with the product name and effective date
Complete the RE: line with the exact product or service name and the date the new price takes effect. This is the first thing a busy reader sees.
π‘ Keep the subject line under 12 words β longer reference lines get truncated in email previews and printed headers.
3
State the old price, new price, and effective date in the opening
In the first paragraph, write the current price, the reduced price, and the date the change applies. Do not save this information for later in the letter.
π‘ Express the savings as both a dollar amount and a percentage β '$20 less per unit (15% savings)' β to make the benefit concrete.
4
Add a one-sentence reason for the reduction
Explain in plain language why the price is going down β cost savings passed on, supplier renegotiation, increased production volume, or a competitive decision. Keep it to one or two sentences.
π‘ Avoid language that implies the previous price was unfair. Frame the reason as a positive business development, not a correction.
5
Define the scope and any conditions
List which products or SKUs are affected, any minimum order requirements, geographic limits, and whether the price applies to existing open orders or only new ones placed after the effective date.
π‘ If multiple products are affected, attach a revised price list rather than listing every item in the letter body β it keeps the letter concise and the data easy to reference.
6
Add a price comparison table for clarity
Insert a simple two-column table or formatted row showing the old price, new price, and the savings per unit or subscription period.
π‘ Including the percentage reduction alongside the dollar figure helps recipients quickly calculate their annual savings β a natural motivator to increase order volume.
7
Close with a specific call to action and your signature
Direct the recipient to a named contact, phone number, email, or ordering portal. Complete the complimentary close with your full name, title, and direct contact details.
π‘ If the reduced price is time-limited or subject to stock availability, state the deadline clearly in the call to action β urgency increases response rates.