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Define the single desired action
Before writing a word, decide what one action you want the reader to take β buy, book, or sign up. Every section of the page should point toward that single action. A page that offers two choices converts at half the rate of one that offers one.
π‘ Write the CTA button text first. If you can't describe the action in three words, your offer isn't clear enough yet.
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Write the problem section using the reader's own words
Pull exact phrases from customer reviews, support tickets, forum posts, or sales call notes. The problem section should read like the reader wrote it themselves β because the language came from people exactly like them.
π‘ Read your problem copy out loud. If it sounds like marketing, rewrite it until it sounds like a frustrated person venting to a friend.
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Craft a headline that names the outcome and the audience
Test at least three headline formulas: outcome + audience, problem + solution, and before/after contrast. Choose the one that a cold visitor β someone who has never heard of you β would immediately understand without any context.
π‘ The [OUTCOME] for [AUDIENCE] without [PAIN POINT] formula works for most offers and can be drafted in under five minutes once you know your value proposition.
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Build the benefits list from customer outcomes, not features
Take each feature of your offer and complete the sentence: 'Which means you'll be able to...' That completion is your benefit bullet. Pair each benefit with the feature that delivers it in parentheses or as a sub-bullet.
π‘ Aim for six to ten benefit bullets. Fewer than six feels thin; more than twelve creates decision fatigue.
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Select three to six testimonials that handle specific objections
Map your best testimonials to your three biggest objections β price, effort, and fit. Choose one testimonial per objection that directly addresses it with a named, specific result. Place them near the section most relevant to the objection they address.
π‘ A testimonial with a full name, photo, and company or city converts at significantly higher rates than an anonymous quote or initials.
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State the price with an anchor and a payment option
Show the total value of all included components before revealing the price. If you offer a payment plan, present it as '[X] payments of $[Y]' β monthly installment framing consistently outperforms a lump-sum price for offers above $300.
π‘ Never make the reader scroll back up to find the price again. Include the price and CTA at least twice on any page taller than three screens.
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Write the guarantee with exact terms and conditions
State the refund window in days, what the buyer needs to do to qualify, and what they get back. Specific guarantees outperform vague ones because they signal that the seller has confidence in the outcome.
π‘ A 30-day money-back guarantee with a simple email process converts better than a 60-day guarantee with a complicated request form.
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Review and cut every sentence that serves the seller, not the reader
Read the full page and flag every sentence that starts with 'I,' 'We,' or the company name. Rewrite each one to center the reader's outcome. Sales copy that talks about the seller rather than the buyer consistently underperforms.
π‘ The ratio of 'you/your' to 'I/we' on a high-converting page is typically 3:1 or higher. Count yours before publishing.