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OBJECT: THANK YOU FOR SUBMISSION AND REQUEST FOR REVISION Dear [CONTACT NAME], The speech that you submitted to me for the presentation at [DESCRIBE] is excellent with one minor exception. Inasmuch as [NAME] is somewhat sensitive about [DESCRIBE], I feel that it would be best not to reference this subject. I would appreciate it if you would delete those sections in Paragraphs [NUMBER] and [NUMBER] which specifically comment about [DESCRIBE], and find a suitable substitution. Once again, the speech is very well written. Thank